问题描述：
我写的这句话有错吗
The project we invest is a technological item named “Car Bearty”,who’s development is based on the traditional car maintaining,and make the conventional car be overshadowed and too inferior to bear comparison on the utilizing of new material as well as technology.
我写的这句话有错吗?
好像用who's 有些别扭~而且有一些地方需要改进的~
The project we invest is a technological item named “Car Bearty”,who’s development is based on the traditional car maintaining,and make the conventional car be overshadowed and too inferior to bear comparison on the utilizing of new material as well as technology.
我写的这句话有错吗?
好像用who's 有些别扭~而且有一些地方需要改进的~
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