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whenever i am asked what i 'd like to do in my spare time ,i'll not hesitate a moment to say that i love traveling
last year,l had a short visit to Beijing with my family.it was my first time to get there,so i was curious about this city and visited the palaces of historical interest(要不要大写).when the Great wall appeared in front of us,we couldn't help thinking how wonderful it is!it is said you can see it from the space.although this is false（这里我想说明这句话是错误的,能否用false）,i’m (这里需要用过去式吗)still proud of it
i enioy（这里需要用过去式吗 ） every minutes of this trip.it was really an unforgettable experience
whenever i am asked what i 'd like to do in my spare time ,i'll not hesitate a moment to say that i love traveling
last year,l had a short visit to Beijing with my family.it was my first time to get there,so i was curious about this city and visited the palaces of historical interest(要不要大写).when the Great wall appeared in front of us,we couldn't help thinking how wonderful it is!it is said you can see it from the space.although this is false（这里我想说明这句话是错误的,能否用false）,i’m (这里需要用过去式吗)still proud of it
i enioy（这里需要用过去式吗 ） every minutes of this trip.it was really an unforgettable experience
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