大虾们帮我看看我的英文自我介绍有没有语法错误 再看看那里还需要修改

问题描述:

大虾们帮我看看我的英文自我介绍有没有语法错误 再看看那里还需要修改
英文:Do you recognize a girl who is out-going hard-working confident and modest named ZhangMengTing?She is interested in singing songs and drawing pictures. She is harding-working and kindess.Of course she also have many shortcomings
.even though her achievements are not the best but she really is most diligent.So she gets along well with her classmates.If you feel regreting to not recognize this girl,don't to be disappointed.Because I'm that girl,a 15-year-ord girl .Do you like me?
译文:你认识一个叫张梦婷的外向 努力 自信 谦虚的女孩吗?她对唱歌和画画感兴趣.她努力而且和善,当然他也有很多缺点.虽然她的成绩不是最好的,但是她却真的是最勤奋的.所以她和她的同学相处的很好.如果你后悔没有认识这个女孩,请不要失望,因为我就是那个女孩,一个15岁在……(哪个学校哪个班上学)的女孩.你喜欢我吗?
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-11-23

问题解答:

我来补答
认识,我觉得know比recognize好.
唱歌和画画,singing and drawing 就可以了.
和善,应该用形容词,kind.
she also has 不是have.
the most diligent.
don't be 不用to.
 
 
展开全文阅读
剩余:2000