请高手给俺修改一下四级英语作文,

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请高手给俺修改一下四级英语作文,
Due Attention should be given to spelling
Nowadays with the rapid development of economic,more and more English speaking are commonly and widely used in everyday life,however,what worries most of us is that many students attach less importance to spelling in English learning.
There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of spelling in English learning.It is obvious that many students don’t like spelling English.But why they don’t like it Because the students always write Chinese and speaking Chinese,the treat English as homework.It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.If we don’t correct the problem,we will make our English study badly.
In order to charge this situation,I think we should take some effective measures.Firstly let students write English words and sentence,secondly write interesting things everyday and read it,All in all,they should do more exercises in English spelling.
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说真的,这篇作文写得很好!若是一定要改错的话,有如下几点:
1:第二段最后 correct the problem.最好是解决问题而不是改正问题,最好用solve
2:同样这一段最后 badly 用的不正确.badly是副词 非常地 严重地,而不是坏的副词
这里可以用bad 的比较级worse
3:第三段 charge ————change 估计是你打错了
总的来说 写的不错 呵呵
 
 
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