求一篇六年级的英语作文【60字左右,不要太深奥,浅一点没事,但语法要正确】

Last Summer Holiday
l went to Beijing last summer holiday.Oh,that was so fun.l had a great time in Beijing.l went to The Great Wall.The Great Wall was so long and so good.l loved it very much.l also went to the Palace Museum.The Palace Museum had so many great things.l was very happy .Oh,l had a good time last summer holiday.
去年暑假
去年夏天我去北京度假.噢,那太fun.l度过了一段美好的时光在Beijing.l去长城.长城是很久了,所以good.l爱很much.l也去故宫.故宫有这么多伟大的things.l非常高兴哦,我有一个很好的时间去年暑假.