英语翻译阜阳市 家得利商贸公司 给我提供这个工作机会.我相信我能够胜任这份工作,并将为之努力工作.这个句子有点不通顺对吧

I'm really grateful that the Fuyang JiaDeLi trading company offered me this job opportunity.I believe I can be competent for this job,and I'll work as hard as I can.