写一篇英语作文.假如你是一名新转来的学生.在课堂上老师让你用英语作自我介绍并谈谈在原来学校的情况.

Hi, My name is Tom Li. I came to this city last week and this is my first English lesson in this school. I came to this city from Beijing. My family moved here because my Dad has got a new permannent job here. My previous school was Number 54 High School in Beijing, which was large school with over six hundred girls and boys. I had studied there for three years before I transfered here. I loved my school very much because I had many friends there. I hope I can make new friends here soon. I am looking forward to your help to get myself familar with this school.
再问： 能不能别用过去式...............而且最好是七年级下的水品
再答： Hi, My name is Tom Li. I come to this city to live and this is my first English lesson in this school. I am from Beijing. My family come here because my Dad has a new job here. My old school is Number 54 High School in Beijing. It is a large school with over six hundred girls and boys. I was there for three years before I come here. I love my school very much because I have many friends there. I hope I can make new friends here soon. I am looking forward to your help to get myself familar with this school.