麻烦修改英语作文我的水平很次,读起来很轻松.分很少,假定你是李华,自制一些中国结(Chinese knot).给开网店的

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麻烦修改英语作文
我的水平很次,读起来很轻松.分很少,
假定你是李华,自制一些中国结(Chinese knot).给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信,请他代卖,要点包括:1.外观(尺寸、颜色、材料);2.象征意义 ;3.价格.
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Tom:
No time no see.How are you I want to tell you a message.I made some Chinese Knot in past 3 months that I want to give you to sell in the Internet.//The Chinese Knot is 0.2 metres and it made for wool.It looks comfortable.oh,it’s red.In Chinese the Knot is the syboml of happiness.The price of the Knot is 10 RMB.How?it’s very cheap.//Do you want to sell it?I will give you 3 days to think it.Please write to me if you want to sell it.I think it will be sell out queit in America.
Yours
Lihua
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-11-26

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在不在 , 要在的话我帮你写 你追问 , 十分钟搞定 ,你加分,妹子英语研究生在读
再问: 在,你要多少分
再答: 没事 你采纳就行 我在写呢
再答: Dear tom: how do you do?how is everything going on with your life?I wanna tell you something that you might be interested in.I know u are running a online store,as I have made some Chinese knots,I want to request you to do me a favor that is cooperate with me to sell those items,is it okay with you?Chinese knot is often used to express good wishes,their plam-size make them looks tasteful,it's red color with the gold side and it's made of wool,refering to the price,how about 10RMB for each one?If you feel interesting about it, I will tell you more details later. looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes for you. yours, Lihua
再问: 不好意思,我不是让你写范文呢,我是让你修改我的文章,我先采纳你把。麻烦修改我的文章,指出哪里错误即可,不需要重写。
再答: 啊。。。。。喵。。。。。好吧。。。。第一句应该是long time no see ,I want to tell you a message 也不准确 ,妹子就是留学生 ,这是中式英语,没人这么说的 ,直接i want to tell you something/a news,. I made some Chinese Knot-knots in past 3 months-in the past 3 months that I want to give you -so that i want to give them to you to sell in the Internet.--on the internet //The Chinese Knot is 0.2 metres-s去掉 and it made for wool-made of .It looks comfortable.-这看上去很舒服?你用我上面那句吧their plam-size make them looks tasteful 他们巴掌大小的尺寸让他们看起来很雅致。 oh,it’s red.In Chinese the Knot is the syboml of happiness-in china,the chinese knot..... .The price of the Knot is 10 RMB.How?-how is it? it’s very cheap.//Do you want to sell it?-it 改them I will give you 3 days to think it.-think about it. Please write to me if you want to sell it.-please reply me...... I think it will be sell out queit in America. -sold out quickly
 
 
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