英语翻译我已经收到您的email,我的英文不好,请见谅,如有错误之处请指出来,不甚感激.对了,是否可以给我您的电话或者分

I have received your E-mail.Please forgive my poor English.It would be grateful if you can ponit our my mistakes.
By the way,would you please give me your phone number or phone number of the martial arts branch,because i need your number to finish the invitation writing.Thank you very much.
你的武术分会应该有自己的英文名称,所以最好你用官方的.
yup,only branch is all right.