英语翻译上海著名的景点有豫园,东方明珠,金茂大厦,外滩,上海野生动物园,人民广场等等.这句话用英文怎么说?一定要语法准确

Shanghai‘s famous attractions are Yuyuan Garden,Pearl of the Orient,Jin Mao Tower,Bund,Shanghai Wild Animal Park,People's Square and so on.
There are many famous attractions in Shanghai such as Yuyuan Garden,Pearl of the Orient,Jin Mao Tower,Bund,Shanghai Wild Animal Park,People's Square.