英语作文求学霸帮忙青少年研究专家SusanBeacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏,邀请大家分享心目中‘’最好的礼物‘’

问题描述:

英语作文求学霸帮忙
青少年研究专家SusanBeacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏,邀请大家分享心目中‘’最好的礼物‘’。她认为,礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力。
假设你是李华,请用英语发个帖子,内容如下:
1.赞同susan的看法
2.你收到或送出去的礼物是什么
3.该礼物的意义
4.期待大家的回复
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I am a high school student from china
【高一的水平,希望不要写的太好了,也不要太差 ,毕竟我是学渣】
1个回答 分类:综合 2015-05-21

问题解答:

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I am a high school student from China and I am quite for your opinion about best gifts: the value of gifts lies in its intension so we should devote more to them.
The best gift I’ve ever received is a book from my English teacher, Debbie, which she brought to me when she returned from her holiday in USA. The book’s name is Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul: The Real Deal: Friends. I value this book because it shows me how to keep the balance of friendship in a positive way. And I must thank my favorite teacher for her care about me because she found me at loss dealing with friends at one time. Reading it, I have been inspired and balanced myself in life and study.
I strongly recommend you to read it and share what you gain with me in your reply.
Yours ever,
Li Hua
审题:该题也具有较大的开放度。但按要求一定要写出Susan的看法,而这个看法就在试题的写作说明里:礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力。而选择什么样的角度来写一定要根据自己的生活和切身感受,且要量力而行。
写作技巧:一般情况下应分三段来完成改写任务:1阐释Susan的观点并表示认同。2收到或送出的礼物的具体描写及其意义。该部分是本写作任务的重点,应多费笔墨完成。3表期待应另外起段完成,以便阅卷老师发现和评判内容要点。遣词造句尽量使用自己熟悉的词句。优秀学生一定要在保持正确的前提下尽量使用较为复杂的句型,如状语从句,定语从句,倒装句和适量的非谓语动词。特别强调:一定要注意卷面整洁并避免拼写错误。
 
 
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