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求英语大神找语病告诉我怎么改
When I saw you for the first time , I clearly realized that I was going to stay with you and love you forever . My life journey has been straight and its only turn was because I run across you .Only when your silhouette frequently appear before my eyes did I realize that I really had fallen in with you .Please forgive me for my keeping silence , behind which is my countless missing you .What I only want to tell you is that everything is only because of you and you are the everything .It is the
When I saw you for the first time , I clearly realized that I was going to stay with you and love you forever . My life journey has been straight and its only turn was because I run across you .Only when your silhouette frequently appear before my eyes did I realize that I really had fallen in with you .Please forgive me for my keeping silence , behind which is my countless missing you .What I only want to tell you is that everything is only because of you and you are the everything .It is the
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