雅思作文,求大神看看多少分合适

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Some people think that too much attention and too many resources have been given to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Today,whether people have paid too much attention to the protection of wild animals and birds has triggered a controversy.Fom a personal viewpoint,I contend that individuals should solve their problems as well as protect the wild animals. Indeed,a number of individuals view the problem of protecting wildlife as the most significant issues.They almost ignore the development of society. It should be pointed out that if human-beings consume too much resources on the natural environment,then they might lose their ability to solve the social problems such as global economic crisis,war and disease. As a result,the stability of countries will probably be influenced by animals problems because of wasting a lot of food,paper as well as medicine on it. Nevertheless, there are saveral advantages to protecting other species. One advantage is that the delicate ecological balance can be strengthened by a person who makes great affort to the issues of wildlife.scientific research and some methods may have a crucial impact on the endangered species.scientists and tourists can not only save their life but also protect their habitats directly.If people can help them to avoid extinction,then some entities such as companies, governments and organizations are able to focus on social problems such as famine,disease and natural disaster.They can use the resources to improve our daily life instead of wasting money to protect the ecological balance unnecessarily.What's more,since teachers probably do not have ample examples to teach their students ,by showing them those research and methods,they can enhance children's understanding of earth.This situation is beneficial to the education. In conclusion,while paying attention to the environmental problem is necessary,I contend that people need to keep the balance between nat

大学作业 1个回答 分类:英语 2018-09-26

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    一般人来看都会觉得这篇作文写的非常好,但是雅思并不同于普通的考试,它的评分标准是非常严格的。雅思作文想要得到高分,一定要记住以下几点:

   1、回应全部写作任务;

   2、始终呈现一个清晰的观点;

   3、对主要论点进行论证,不要出现过于一概而论的倾向,或论点缺乏重点。

   按照这几点去写,分数都不会低于6分。

 
 
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