求Touring Shanghai的作文60字左右,讲朋友将要来看我,我带他|她去玩.

Today is Saturday, my good friend Amy came to my house to play.
Amy: we played out today.
I: Well, that go there?
Amy: let's go to the Oriental Pearl TV Tower.
I: OK, we'll leave?
Amy: Yes, go right away.
Amy: the Oriental Pearl TV Tower from your home?
I: near 600 meters.
Amy: that we need much time to?
I: 20 minutes.
Amy: ah, so long ah, we still go biking.
I: ok.
今天是星期六,我的好朋友艾米来我家玩.
艾米：我们出去玩吧.
我：好吧,那去吗?
艾米：让我们去东方明珠电视塔.
我：好的,我们就去吗?
艾米：是的,马上就去.
艾米：东方明珠电视塔离你家多远?
我：不远就600米.
艾米：那我们需要多少时间才可以到呢?
我：20分钟.
中文打了?可以吗
地点是Oriental Pearl TV Tower?
名字可以换下
这个是对话,要短文再说
再问： 呵呵，是作文，不过还是谢了，呵呵
再答： 等下，我打下，只是时间上的问题... Today is Saturday, my good friend Amy came to my house to play. We go to the Oriental Pearl TV Tower watch. There are 600 metres from the house, all of us go. Only took 20 minutes to get to the Oriental Pearl TV Tower有点短..呵呵