五年级英语自我介绍,60个单词左右

总体来说写的不错,参考参考我写的吧!
（我认为我写的还可以~）P.S.你最好稍微的修改修改.我的语法不太好.
Hello everybody!I want to make friends with you.
Now,let me first introduce myself.
My name is XX and i I am 11 years old.
I am from taizhou siom elementary school in Class XX grade 5.
In school I study hard,everybody says i'm a hardworking gril.
I am a lovely and clever girl,in school everyone likes me!
My hobbies are English,drawing pictures and music.And I'm relly good at these!
I hope you like me,If you will be my good friend,I'll be very happy.
So,what?Don't stand there!Come on and be friends with me!