我想问一个英语短句 In this era,number of people are increasing who be

首先In this era是中式英语,应该换成Nowadays
number of people are increasing who believe learn new skills and knowledge can directly help him that have a chance of work and promote of chance.
这句话想要表达的意思我基本可以理解,但有很多错误,主要是句子整体结构的把握
改正如下：
the number of people who believe that learning new skills and knowledges can directly help them to have more chance of work and promotions
具体我就不一点一点的说了,提醒楼主,如果去掉所有修饰语,这句话的主句就是The number of people is increasing,其它所有成分都是对这句的补充
在没有把握去掌握句子的整体结构,特别是这种长句的时候,建议用一些简单句来表达.
希望对你有用
再问： 你解释的 increasing ... 好像是不是漏了？
再答： 我并没有翻译你的句子啊，只是帮你分析一下 呵呵
再问： 呵呵，那可不可以这样？the increasing number of people who believe that learning new skills and knowledges can directly help them to get more chance of work and promotions. 这个地方的increasing 位置对吗？ 还有，‘得到’ 我用的get 行吗？
再答： 可以的