谁能帮我改下一篇英语演讲稿?(急用)

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谁能帮我改下一篇英语演讲稿?(急用)
Good after,ladies and gentlemen.I am glad to stand here.Today,I will talk about friendship. What is friendship? As well-know,it is important between friends.But,how to keep the friendship? It is easy to answer the question.I will give you two pieces of advice.The first ,We must be honest to others to keep the friendship .The second ,we should forgive their failures and do our best to help
them .In short ,friends should help each other .
A good friend is easier lost than that found ,so we should keep friendship beyween friends .
Thanks for listening .主要修改一下语法错误.
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-11-06

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Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen.
It is my honor to stand here.Today,I want to talk about friendship.What is friendship?
Friendship is the most valueable thing in the world.It is a word of encouragement when you are not confident enough.It is a helping hand when you are in trouble.It is an umbrella when you are all wet in the rain.It is not money.It is a partnership with sincerity and kindness.
How to keep the friendship?You may ask?I think friends should be honest and always forgive each other.Cherish friendship and it will become more pure and pleasant day to day.
Thanks for listening .
再问: 太多生单词了,最好是初2左右的
再答: 你早说 我白忙活了
再问: 不好意思
再答: 没关系 As well-know 改为 As we all know we should forgive their failures failures 改fault 好些吧 其他的就按你那个差不多了 表达清楚就可以了 毕竟初二嘛
再问: we should forgive their wrong可以不?wrong比较熟悉些
再答: 那就 we should forgive their mistakes 吧 wrong 不行
 
 
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