.In the next days ,I hope we all become good friends有语法错误吗

in the next days,讲得通,是说接下来的几天
但是,这两个个句子说起来很不顺溜,感觉不大地道就是了
建议稍微改一下,In the next days ,I hope we will become good friends.
I hope we can make friends with each other.
这样说就很顺,感觉舒服多了
对于口语,一定要读出来,多读,读的多了,感觉就有了,到时候怎么用信手拈来,从容不迫