假如你是李明,请根据下面的提示给你的笔友Jim写一封信,告诉他你的第一次学校旅行.

In the happy Sunday morning, we were going to The Great Wall, one of the greatest wonders of the world.
This was my first travel to The Wall,on that day, the wind was gentle and the sun radiant.
When we stood on the Mighty Jinshanling, we really couldn’t express how exciting it is, we all were fascinated at the spectacle of the gigantic dragon. the gigantic dragon starts from Hushan in
Liaoning in the east and ends at Jiayuguan Pass in Gansu in the west, via the nine provinces.
We were amazed at the ingenuity with which our ancestors left us.It was a really nice visiting.
再问： 这样可以把我的开头和结尾套用上去么？？？？
再答： 当然可以，我给你事先安排好的哦
再答： 可以的