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我是今年高三的学生.想报香港大学.我这有篇personal statement,能不能麻烦您帮我修改下?万分感
I’ve heard of the University of Hong Kong when I was young.As time goes by,I get a further knowledge of it via various means.I aware that the University of Hong Kong,with outstanding world academic contributions,has become the top university in Asia.The university has great infrastructure and facilities and also encourages students to participate in open and free academic discussions.All of these greatly inspire me to pursue a chance of becoming a member of it.In addiction,teamwork based coursework assessment fits me well as I really interested in working with others from various backgrounds as a team,which makes it possible for me to experience different cultures and broaden my global vision.
I am an active participant in school activities,having been the President of Students' Association and the editor of our school magazine since I have a passion for literature.These experiences have turned me into a confident and teamwork oriented person and developed my sense of responsibility as well as leadership skills,which will be of vital importance beyond learning ability in my college life.
I choose the Bachelor of Economics/ Bachelor of Economics & Finance as my first will.I believe that economics and finance these two subjects are two complements of each other,where you can combine background knowledge with inner wisdom,mathematical formulae with opinions .And combined with its real world importance,I think it is a both challenging and appealing degree for me.
I hope I can get the chance of studying in the University of Hong Kong,which has been my dream for a long time.Thank you for your reading patiently.
最好能在两天内~
I’ve heard of the University of Hong Kong when I was young.As time goes by,I get a further knowledge of it via various means.I aware that the University of Hong Kong,with outstanding world academic contributions,has become the top university in Asia.The university has great infrastructure and facilities and also encourages students to participate in open and free academic discussions.All of these greatly inspire me to pursue a chance of becoming a member of it.In addiction,teamwork based coursework assessment fits me well as I really interested in working with others from various backgrounds as a team,which makes it possible for me to experience different cultures and broaden my global vision.
I am an active participant in school activities,having been the President of Students' Association and the editor of our school magazine since I have a passion for literature.These experiences have turned me into a confident and teamwork oriented person and developed my sense of responsibility as well as leadership skills,which will be of vital importance beyond learning ability in my college life.
I choose the Bachelor of Economics/ Bachelor of Economics & Finance as my first will.I believe that economics and finance these two subjects are two complements of each other,where you can combine background knowledge with inner wisdom,mathematical formulae with opinions .And combined with its real world importance,I think it is a both challenging and appealing degree for me.
I hope I can get the chance of studying in the University of Hong Kong,which has been my dream for a long time.Thank you for your reading patiently.
最好能在两天内~
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