英文高手帮忙校对修正下这篇文章``

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英文高手帮忙校对修正下这篇文章``
应该很多错误吧``高手帮忙修改下``谢谢```^-^
I do not know whether your engineering department has already known " Google Page Creator " technology of your company ,It has been already a lot of days since in China's Mainland can't use .
We know The PRC Government Often blockade the webpage of GOOGLE,However,if " Google Page Creator " will be unable to use all the time in the future ,This will bring very great trouble and discontented in using several tens of thousands of China's Mainland users of " Google Page Creator "
The First ,this will be a setback of future development of technology of " Google Page Creator " ,
Second,will enable originally trusting users of China's Mainland of GOOGLE feel discontented too
But a main one.We have a lot of important files and webpages to entrust to " Google Page Creator
So I hope in our GOOGLE Company on behalf of using users of China's Mainland of " Google Page Creator ",can intervene this thing ,even resume for one week ,enable us to back up the file of storage.
Thank you very much
Long run in a Chinese user of GOOGLE
还有就是问下大家``一开始的称呼该怎么写啊

1个回答分类：综合 2014-10-07

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嫌麻烦的那位是不是太小看这封信的重要性了?这是要e-mail到Google的客服部吧?可不能让他们小看了我们!英语好的中国人可到处都是!（不过应该很多都像我一样在美国求学吧）我做了比较大幅度的修改,但是意思没有变,希望在我之后看到的各位高手能在此基础上做进一步的改进.
To whom it may concern,（不知道收信人名字时一般都这样写）
I wonder if you know that Google Page Creator cannot be accessed by users in mainland China.This has caused great inconvenience and dissatisfaction,so I sincerely hope that you can address the problem.
The page creator proves to be a very useful tool in developing webpages and would have been especially helpful to millions of Chinese internet users,only if it can be used!So on behalf of these customers and many more potential users,I'd like to ask for your intervention in the issue of the page creator's accessability.That would be of great help--at least to our company.
Thank you very much
A faithful Chinese user of GOOGLE

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