1 my parents 应该用 复数 and I 而不是me 2,上面给出的那句 I nearly believed my eyes ,用错了 nearly是 几乎 差不多的意思 所以 应该是 I can't even believe my eyes 3.It is so cool 原句少了系动词 4 those cute pandas attracted my father so much that he cant even make a move 应该比总是用 eye 什么好一点 5 my mother 那句后面加个In a word, we had a great day .再说Two 那句 会有个过度吧. 总之希望对你有所帮助 ,对上位仁兄也无冒犯之意 .
