I think why the spaniard don’t finish quickly the church is

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I think why the spaniard don’t finish quickly the church is not only it’s difficult and complicated,but also they want to make it looks like Gaudi is still there with them.
感觉句子结构不对,大致意思就是,我认为为什么西班牙人不尽早完成这个教堂不仅是因为这个工程的确困难且复杂,而且他们希望这样看起来高迪仍在他们身边一样
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I think THE REASON why the Spaniard don’t finish the church QUICKLY is THAT:BUILDING IT is not only difficult and complicated,but also looks like Gaudi WERE still (删除there) with them.
"Gaudi WERE with them" 用虚拟语态.
另外这似乎是咱们国人语法太好的通病:喜欢主句套从句,从句再套从句; 叠床架屋的.其实除非是写专业性特强的学术文章,一般复杂句都应该化为多句结构比较简单的连贯性的句子,至少要让说的人可以喘喘气吧.:-)
以下是一种建议改写法:
I think the Spaniard (actually) don’t wish to finish the church quickly -- probably they hope to keep builing it as it feels Gaudi were still with them,although the construction is difficult and complicated anyway.
 
 
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