英文文章纠错,First swimming in the seasideSummer holidays has been

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First swimming in the seaside
Summer holidays has been arriving at ,I have been expecting that day to swim for to study of the seaside.
This has arrived at one day ,my state of mind has been very strained,think that ocean is with waters raging be still calm ,still piling up one tier small wave after another.Arrive in that time!It truns out that ocean is boundless.But I what to be able to afford no consideration to ,running away toward ocean,have not run having been drowned to the billows water that I am moved towards in part by the surge,I not having been daunted by ocean ,still running away toward ocean,I prepare to jump the sea moment,thinks of:"Can I drop into ocean going to Really I away go in.Because of I am incapable swim for.Mother has seen me ,has adopted a baby up me immediately.And ask me:"Can you swim for I said "I can not swim for ".Mother says:Come to teach you "me!Mother has unfolded a technology first performing a dolphin being like traveling law ,mother has made dolphin's posture first ,has jumped into sea mile once going in ,has come out all of a sudden.Let me hold a person in high esteem ,think that I am right away very amazing if I learn the mother technology.I say in a hurry:"Mother ,mother,teach me quickly!Mother says:"Easy to teach you coming me".Mother holds on to my body first ,two hand rolls about forward by me ,the foot is also the same.
I am big with pride after a while,doctrine:"Mother has let me go quickly ,I already may swim for,mother is forced to let me go no way out.But I still can not swim for ,mother says:"In the world every matter simplicity in not imagining to you,I have listened to very ashamed,I have stood up continuing white silk ,failure,but I disappointed ,still continued practising.
Finally guided by mother,I have learned have a swim ,I have also understood a principle at the same time:In the world each a matter simplicity in not imagining to you.
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错误多,分值有点少哟!
①题目错:First Swimming in the Sea(注意什么词该大小写)
②Summer holidays has been arriving at改为:Summer holiday has began ,I had been expecting that day for a long time.
不好意思,后面看不大懂
 
 
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